The roads were bent and curved like a dormant serpent
Just as she had remembered them
Through unlikely gaps in the dense forest, the sun escaped, flooding parts of the dirt road
Specks of dust that had been thrown and tossed into the air from passing cars were revealed by the piercing streaks of lights, like millions of dancing fairies
Once they met the shade though, they simply vanished
Fleetingly disappearing into oblivion
The trees were all tall and spindly
However each unique in their form
They reminded her of ballet dancers; their elongated limbs paused motionless, bent and twisted in incomprehensible positions
With elegance and grace most compellingly maintained however
Flames had tarnished their bark and seared their leaves
But today, it became obvious to her that their beauty was only enhanced by such adversity
Each trunk was entirely black: A shade of darkness as terrifying as the night’s sky with no stars
The seared barks of the trees provided a blank canvas, however, for the sprouting leaves
They grew uncontrollably through the charcoal, vivid and brilliant
She had never seen such contrast before; of colour and darkness, of death and life
It reminded her that in order to grow, she mustn’t be afraid to firstly burn
WOW, impressive take on the prompt!!
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Thank you! I often find images give me inspiration for the daily prompts, they always evoke a memory or feeling
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You did a wonderful job :)
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Beautifully written, great take on the prompt!
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Thank you!
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Love the play of contrast in your poem, the juxtaposition of pain and growth and your vivid imagery. Love this line ‘in order to grow, she mustn’t be afraid to firstly burn’! :D
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You’re comments are always so lovely. I can tell you are really engaging with what I am writing. Do you have any critisisms/ area you think that I can improve?
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I love your work, in all its entirety and for all its individuality! <3 Keep writing please! :D
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Wow! Fantastic read! May I ask, what is your theme for the blog, it’s so clean and crisp.
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Hey Jessica, thanks for the compliment! Well, without getting too personal, my dad has recently fallen ill and as a way to cope, I started to write. The prompts have been perfect in giving me inspiration and motivation to write every day. I am yet to target my writing to a certain audience, what do you suggest?
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I’m very glad to see that you are able to channel your feelings through a creative outlet. I say that you just write whatever you want. After a period of time, your target audience will emerge. Stay true to yourself! I’m hoping for more great stories :)
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Thanks Jessica :)
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